Just one man’s opinion. You might not need to be quite that ruthless, but this is a good reminder to scrutinize each sentence in your story to make sure it’s pulling its weight.
This blog is mostly so I can vent my feelings and share my interests. Other than that, I am nothing special.
If you don't like Left Wing political thought and philosophy, all things related to horror, the supernatural, the grotesque, guns or the strange, then get the fuck out. I just warned you.